Improvements to Essay

My essay did not actually follow the title or theme that we were set... in order to improve it would definitely be in my best favour to actually follow the question and compare another American movie to that of the British film Dredd. The points I made were bias to my opinion of the question, and I should instead try to have a more balance and non biased view point.

• Pick an American film to use as reference and compare
• Use an unbiased opinion
• Research further into the production of Dredd